"Gosh, golly, George!" said Timmy, excitedly. "We've solved the case - the swarvy foreigner did steal Lady Butteaux's diamonds and we're off for a smashing feed at Old Pompous House. What could be more spliffing?"
What's wrong with this, aside from the Famous Five's dog talking.
Spot the adverb. Is it necessary? Surely the text should reveal the character's emotions.
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