Wednesday, 16 September 2015

Really, really short stories... 140 characters

Think 300 is difficult? Have a look at these:

It was only when the water from the taps turned yellow and foamy that we figured out where the missing child was.
— Stephanie Ye, MA student in Creative Writing Prose Fiction at UEA
The farm was too much for John, so he welcomed his brother’s help. One night they drank heavily, leaving a cigarette to ignite the blaze.
— Lynne McKinney, Words and Women member
“It’s done!” the Alchemist said. Creating the Elixir of Immortality had taken decades. He was about to drink it then bam! – heart attack.
— Bernardo Bueno, UEA Creative and Critical Writing PhD Alumnus (2013)
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Monday, 14 September 2015

What's a sentence?

You only need a verb and subject to create a simple sentence.

Jesus wept.

That's the shortest sentence in the Bible. Subject - Jesus, wept - verb.

It's simple, but think of the feeling behind it. Consider, the son of god - powerful, all-seeing, immortal (kind of), highest status etc - simply crying. A human emotion, first thing we do as babies, which is associated with despair, upset etc. Short sentences can have big meaning, especially when these sentences have been led up to with powerful prose.

Normally, there's an object too.

Jesus chased the car.

The object is 'the car'.

Don't write in fragments (sentences without either Subject or Verb) unless for good reason. Tell the examiner that it's a fragment with an ellipsis or ... (only three dots). Dialogue has it's own rules, which we'll cover later.